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The main feedback of earlier presentations was "to find something to make my art special" and let it stand out from the mass. Therefore my research for this presentation was to figure out other artists' ambition and aspiration to help me find my own path/solution and meaning in art. 

For the presentations main art piece "Nocturne in Blue and Gold - The Tay Bridge" I then integrated meaning and purpose in two ways. 

• Firstly, I chose a location I have been to often and know by heart to ease the painting process and add a personal, subjective influence to the digital painting. 
• Secondly, I used literature to support the artworks background story and create an original mood and atmosphere. Beneath one can have a look at the  

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Pros

• More emotive art due to the integration of a poem into "Nocturne in Blue and Gold", as well as more focus on the atmosphere of the digital painting itself, which improves the art a lot and successfully enables it to stand out from my previous digital paintings.
• Integration of abstraction into my paintings shows development progress of my aesthetic journey.
• A clear improvement of craftsmanship skills is visible.
• The portrayal of scenes in different times of the day (day and night versions) demonstrates understanding and knowledge of light and colour theory.

Cons

• The presentation was very short
• Add more content and/or research leading to the results
• Define my aesthetic criteria and explain the goals I want to achieve through my personal artwork better.
• Also summarize the aesthetic journey up to date by describing my thought process and change of aesthetic vision clearer and how I plan to further develop it in the remaining time of the honours project.